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The child

Scared , alone, impatient
Tears unheard no one around
Teddy bear to protect, no mom to over see
Left behind, unwanted, scared
Doors locked, darkness falls upon this child face
The ground rumble the kid clutch teddy bear tight
As the crane comes rolling in



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  • darlee77 gold member
    September 17
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    Wow, this seems an extreme type of neglect and child abuse. Very powerful. God bless.