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More than miss universe

your angel cries
and your simple movements
were welcomed with open arms
tired and worn
i looked into your eyes
it was instant love
after hours of pain
but all was ok
because i had you
and nothing in this world
could take this feeling from me
everything was perfect
not a moment to long
long blond air
and a beautiful smile
i remember the day
as if it were yesterday
today i look at you
and see perfection
and angel that was sent to me
from the heavens above
the worlds next miss universe
but then i notice
miss universe isn't enough
because nothing in this earth
can measure the amount of beauty
that you hold within a single smile
and for me to see you everyday
to hold you and tuck you in
to tell you i love you everymoment i see you
i have to say
i am the luckiest woman in this world
and now i just need you to know
with out you my world is uncomplete
my life not worthy of living
and my world would be full of pain
i need you to know

i love you my darling
more than life itself.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 20
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    This poem does speak as a mother to her child. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the contest.

    Riftkin