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want to love

I want to be in love.

I want to feel the lips of my lover
on mine as we kiss.

To feel the arms going around me as one fold
to hold the hands of ones true love that leaves in
print love thought.

To be able to feel what he
feels night and day.

I want to be in love.

I want to know that someone love
me for me.

Never to leave me.
Never to hit me and never to disown me
like a dog in the night.

Like a bird in the sky our love
will fly to new heights in the sky.

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  • sonia 77
    November 12
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    I like this very much ...!!!

  • pkoirish
    September 21

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    WOW

    I could feel the longing in this piece.. wonderful job.... beautifully written


  • Qjones22
    September 21

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    CONGRADES!!!!

    I was looking on my page and I saw that you were one of my friends and my favorites and now I see why. This is a wonderful poem. It is filled with lots of emotions, and I think that every girl could relate to this. Keep up the good work. I love this. It is a true work of art!!!!!!