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Fly away jailbird.

I am chained in place unable to move
my haunting past will be the death of me soon
my heart is now a cement hell
and my mind is a solitude full of screams and yells

and the mistake I made
has marked me in society with a F grade
everytime I am actually doing well
I have to work through yet again another torturous hell

and I want so bad to be free
I did my time don't you agree?
I spent months locked up for something I dont remember
but I can not even move on now because of that fucking september!

I can't get a job and I can't go to school
all because societys fucking cruel!
I want so bad to start a life
but life has been postponed and replaced with grief and strief

and I have waited four years
just to be able to shed those happy tears
when my record is gone
and I can finally play this game and not be a pawn

now I have four months left
that day will be the ultimate gift
but sometimes I wonder if its too good to be true
because that is something life tends to do

and I have just given up hope that the day will come
until it does I sit here coming undone
I have held on this long but I am not sure I can much longer
I am only getting weaker never stronger


and I sit here in my cold cell
wearing my black and white barcode attire in this hell
waiting impatiently for that day to come
when I can spread my wings and finally be done

fly away jail bird
fly away home
there will be no more worries
your time spent is done

fly away jail bird
you are now free
fly away jail bird
your futures guaranteed...








Author notes

this is a vent about my juvenille record, that is coming back to bite me in the ass with ne thing I do. cant get a job, or work, or even volunteer. it happend when i was 15, and can not get off my record until I am 20. its just horrible and society sucks. I dont even remember doing what I did, and it was not my fault it was the hospitals for having me on so much medication at that time. 20 pills 4 times a day is enuff for ne one person to blak out. so hope u guys enjoy it aint the best, like I said its just a vent...but your comments will deff be appreciate.

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Comments


  • silent.insanity
    September 21
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    actually this is really well put together good job XD


  • NvrTh1nEn0ugh
    September 18
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    I love the last two stanzas. They just flow so nicely have a great rythm. Nice job overall.

  • OurxBeginning
    September 17

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    A great write. Filled with emotions and the rhyming was just fantastic. If you don't mind my asking what happened? I agree society is too hard these days.. and it's funny because sometimes the ones that did way more wrong are set free. Wonderful job and keep it up.

  • hend shaheen
    September 17

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    the 2nd stanza is ma best....nice poem with good flow...and ya society can have stupid rules!!!nthn is left 4 months so hang on!!!