Descend into uncharted waters
both beautiful and misleading,
where secrets lie behind every
corner and grotto.
Eerie creatures and sinister origins
fall fathoms below ,
and light cannot reach
the darkest cove of
this masked utopia.
Welcome to Rapture,
where "a man chooses, and a slave obeys"
in the unknown metropolis concealed by
a facade of circus faces,
and psychotic voices long repeating
"would ya kindly".
Revealed cryptic memories
among secluded diaries,
lurking to covet the sweat
entitled to your brow;
Forever lost in the briny deep,
bound to the emerald underworld,
a city hidden beneath the sea.
Author notes
This is written about the amazing video game called Bioshock.
born with no direction, I'll just keep on spinning
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awesome
really well done
and at the same time really eerie
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very interesting write i really enjoyed it, especially your word choice well done!
~betrayals
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oh god i love that game, haha.... the ending was such a shock.
This is a nice piece about a great game! ^_^
Rate it five stars, would ya kindly?
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Wow. You've done a really great job with this one!!!!!
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It's also basically how they described Bioshock 2, but, it's not out yet, so this is a perfect description of a great video game!
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Superb Plus
Wow, I love the imagery which you have created. Until I saw your footnote, I had no idea this was inspired by a video game. You are quite talented in your writing. Thanks for sharing.
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thank you!!
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good
Your have a gift in telling a story that lets the reader feel a part of what is unfolding before them. Your words play within our hearts and the game comes alive. The words sound good and paint a many colored canvas of sights and sounds that the reader can relate to.
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thanks
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Really awesome poem about a fuking amazing game!
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thank you jake :] i agree!!!
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I am captured by the adventure and fantasy of this poem
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