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I'm Addicted To You.


Every part of you,
is beauty in my eyes.
Your caring nature for others
the soft comforting that heals my cries.

All I think of is you
you're down deep in my heart.
And I know myself that if I don't have you
my world will fall apart.

I really think you're perfect
no matter how much you put yourself down.
Because I think your beautiful
and in love, I slowly drown.

 

The distance may seem allot travel

but love will light the way.

There will be nothing stopping me from getting you

because I love you more than words can say.

 

 

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100: I'm Addicted To You. :]

I love you. <3 :[


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  • Never-Better25
    October 6

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    I love this one! It kinda reminds me of one I wrote Possession. I can feel your love and longing for the one you love! I love the second and third stanzas! Just beautiful!!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 26
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    A pleasure to read

    This is very well done and with such feelings indeed


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 23
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    Sweet. Cute. Lovable. Now thats poetry!


  • Leanna-bean
    September 21

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    This is simply beautiful there is no other words to describe it! I really enjoyed this poem! Thank you so very much for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck to you!


  • ClosedEyes
    September 19

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    Wow..! Super beautiful..! I actually have goosebumps here!
    Really hope you win the contest! You deserve it!
    Amazing write.. wish i could write like you do!
    Keep it up (:
    x


  • Animegirl- 17
    September 17

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    I Love it! that is amazing


  • ShaShay
    September 17

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    Very touching feel to this write. I can feel you put your heart into this. You might want to check the last stanza for typos and a left out word in the first line of the same. I didn't see a question so didn't understand the question mark. Please take this as an attempt to help and not to pick apart or criticize.
    Sharon


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    September 17

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    damn i so feel this piece hun. i really relate to it so much. its such a sweet, soft loving poem. i loved it.

    wish you the best for the contest!


  • HugsForEveryone
    September 17
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    Awwwh.
    Lovely.
    <3<3<3


  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 17

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    Sweet and well written. A lovely poem.


  • PainedLoner
    September 17

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    Awww. Whoever you wrote this poem about is so lucky. I would love to have someone love me that much and could only hope that the person I am with loves me like that. This is a very beautiful write. Well done!


  • sonia 77
    September 17

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    Oohhh.. god what a lucky man he is ..wow this one is the best i have ever seen gud luck in the contest my friend !!!


  • Hija of the King
    September 17
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    so sweet

    i love it! Great poem!!


  • Naznomarn
    September 17
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    Awwah! So sweet!


  • Sanctify77
    September 17

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    sweet

    A bit simplehearted which can be perfect at that, but most like to complicate the heart somehow that gives it more passion

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