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Dumb Bitch

You forgot to lock the gate up the stairs,
Bitch, are you worth your salt?
'Cause of you we're going down the pipe.
You're less than my horse's poop,
Do you hear me you piece of shit?
I need you to go you're like a weed to me.
All you do is get older.
Though you don't ripen like a sweet grape.
I think in ten years time.
You'll be the wife of some unlucky frog.

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assignment 1 - poop,grape,frog,salt,time,stairs,lock,pipe,gate,weed.
I'm not even going to lie. This is so forced this word bank made laugh and giggle.And it's not just because poop is a word and I'm immature. Hehehe poop.

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  • serenity silvermoon
    September 18

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    its might have been forsed but it was funny and great you did a great job thanks for sharing keep up the great work i give you an A+


  • shattered.frisco
    September 17

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    Interesting word choice. I kind of figured that you would make it in to an abuse type setting, but even though you feel it was forced, I thought it was all normal, free flowing, and typical except the word poop. It just didn't fit. If you took that out, it would be a serious and intense poem, and one that more people should read!! This was awesome Kristen!!

    xx
    emmi