I am tired of living a lie
that hides my feelings for you.
My heart sings when you are around
me.
Your voice puts me into rest
everytime I hear you speack
to me.
My heart is set on you and
my thoughts wonder about
you.
It wonder where you at
where you been and are
you thinking about me as
well..
Sometimes my soul
fluders to the sky when
I see you walking towards
me.
My chest can no longer hold
this beating heart of mine
in its cage no more.
How was the time that you spend
with me did you like it or did you
love it..
Please tell me
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My heart is set on you. . . Wondering how THAT person is, where they are, if they're thinking of you. Wanting to be with them, to let them know how you feel. How hard that is to do!! How very scary!! This is so well written; you captured the feeling of being in love so well!! I loved this!!!
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Lovely'' very lovably you have write your heart here ...i love this one nice work ...!!
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Very nice write dear poet only a couple of things. there are two misspelled words the first is in the second stanza "speak" and the second is in the third stabza fludders. I'm sure you know this and this is just an over look. Not to worry I do it all the time...lol
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nice write you have here. One change fluder is actually spelled with two d's as in fludders. I think that is correct at least. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Very heartfelt
Wonderful emotion and great flow...These stanza's say it all for me...Sometimes my soul
fluders to the sky when
I see you walking towards
me.
My chest can no longer hold
this beating heart of mine
in its cage no more.
The entire poem was like a warm blanket on a cold night..
PKO
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The final stanza was beautiful. The whole poem dangled hope in front of me, but never let me hug it to myself. Thank you for sharing this. It is obviously heart-felt.
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