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Burning Up

Forever's a fever, you are my drug
I love you forever, you're sent from above
Give me some guidance, poison my blood
...
You're contagious, but I'm willing

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  • love4poems
    September 20

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    i love this! i love the rhythm and everything about this!!! amazing job at such a short piece!


  • Ellek
    September 16

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    Beautiful

    Baby, this is great you kept a rhyme and the space gave it a nice effect! The rythm works very well for the piece. I LOVE YOU!!! Great write, love.