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Lies of Love He Told

My heart trambled,
My mind rushing a mile a minute,

It just wants  a way,
To put twisted feelings,
Into words.

He promised that his love was for certain,
I swore I'd crush his heart,

He shot back at me with false lies,

'Always and forever,
You'll never be able to push me away.'

1, 2, 3, 4,
Up to a hundered,
If not more,
Were the lies he told.

Now I know,
The truth he withheld.

Nothing last forever but the lies,

The lies that fill our ears,
The lies that fill our hearts with hope and joy.

Lies bring us love,
And lies bring us down.

So I beg him now,

To take his lies,
His friendship,

His so-called love,

To let me live in peace

Perhaps,
Even take the memories.

He's already got the broken peice of my heart,
I simply refuse to give him all of it.

One day,
Someone won't tell me those lies,

And they'll have to pay the price,
I won't have a whole heart to give them.

For that I hope he dies.

Author notes

Recent break up....surprise! lol. I probably don't really hope he dies....but at the moment I do.

Feel the love now dickwad?

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  • Alissa Marie
    October 2

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    wow. way to put it into words. i like it nicely done.
    hope you've been feeling somewhat better since the break up..i know how it feels.

    • i'm feeling extremely better compared to the day i wrote this thank you for reading this...i think. haha.

      i heard you and jake were FINALLY going out? YAY!