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Prison Cell Blues

The sun is shining,
But in my cell it's dark,
The sun is shining,
But in my cell it's dark.
Another day in this prison,
My thousandth tally mark.

Leadbelly used to live here,
In a cell down the hall.
Leadbelly lived her,
In a cell down the hall.
Arrested for a murder,
Set free by the governor's call.

Me I ain't so lucky,
No guitar to play a song,
Lord I ain't so lucky,
No guitar to play a song.
I wanna go see Chicago,
Even though I don't belong.

My baby came to see me,
Wearin a dress I never seen.
My baby came to see me,
Wearin a dress I never seen.
My baby says she's leaving,
Going with a boy just seventeen.

Lord the sun is shining,
But in my cell it's dark,
The sun is shining,
But in my cell it's dark.
Another day in this prison,
My thousandth tally mark.

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  • toomysterious
    September 19

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    Rich rhythms of old time blues in this. All the anguish, all the angst set loose in song. I can hear Leadbelly giving voice to this on the strings of his guitar.