As I take you in my arms, as our lips first meet,
a spark of lust ignites, we feel our passion’s heat.
The feel of lips together, as they begin to part,
they welcome exploration of the soul and heart.
Now bodies come together and hands begin to creep
as we move in perfect union while our tongues search deep
within the pleasured warmth, playfully exploring
the taste and feel of passion, sending our lust soaring.
Hands roam with free abandon excited at the feel
of responsive flesh and clothes begin to peel.
As moan’s being to fill the air and we move toward shared bliss
somewhere in our minds we know…
…it started with a kiss.
Author notes
Happy Birthday, Jin... just for you 
A contest entry
- but not just any kiss... by JinSays.
1532 points, ended September 21, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Ahh.. it all starts with a kiss Lovely write.. fills up the senses with thoughts of a beautiful kiss.
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Nicely done, although in my opinion, this could have flowed a little smoother if the syllable count was even, all in all; nicely done.
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I sent you a million kisses, and all I get is one stinkin kiss back?
Ahhh Ken, nobody does it like you, love. And you've been gone a coon's age, and I missed ya. How could you live without me like that?
lol...its my birthday-I can be silly I guess. If I dont I'll cry. 
My most memorable birthday present ever, was a kiss. but not just any kiss, and you filled my request perfectly, you sly old devil, you.
with love, and a thank you.
jin -
Well written and as always exquisitely sensual. The progression from one kiss to so much more is easy to envision in this wonderful poem.
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Hmmm the passion that can grow from a kiss.
Beautifully worded...a well written piece.
Very well done.
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Love it Ken
Nice to read your work again and the Romanticism is beautiful, the touch of and all starting with a kiss...
Best wishes to you
Julie
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I like it!
This was very well written. Thank you for sharing!
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