Loneliness consumed me until I laid eyes on you.
Our love grew to heights that no other can compare.
Veronica and Thomas, born from this passion, now
Everyday spent, lost in emotion.
Only God knows the depth of my feelings
Found raging inside me for you
A match made in heaven, before it ever began
Life without you would be no life at all.
If you were to fall from my heart,
Five hundred miles wouldn't seem so far.
Even your words seem to linger on my lips,
Telling me, showing me, proving your love is real.
I cannot say I love you enough
My husband, I love you more than you know
Especially when you love me like you do.
Author notes
I was just reading an acrostic I did a very long time ago and decided to go in that direction here..
2. "Someone asked me what I loved most about life. I smiled and replied, 'The person that I'm with right now.'" --Source Unknown
So it isn't my best work, but I think it works nicely with the acrostic form I chose. 
Just a bit of something I have not done in a while.. Good luck judging and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
A contest entry
- Lovingly Quoted 2 by Heavenly Angel.
700 points, ended September 25, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A great dedication to your husband professing of your love. I found a few minor gramatical errors but they took nothing from the poem. Good luck. Rose
layed eyes on you>laid eyes upon you.
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a sweet loving piece giving evidence to the love behind your words and life.
nicely done.
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This is a beautiful write. This poem reminds me that even when we may love a person, what really makes people feel blessed in life is to have the person you love to feel the same way and love you in return. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Now this is beautiful
I LOVE this piece, honey and thank you for the birthday wishes!!
I love your poem!!
All the best!
Sandy
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