I once believed you were the one!
I once believed I couldn't love anyone but you!
but now I see the truth
the stone-cold, rip your heart out, break your spirits truth
you and I were never meant to be together
to quote "but I think I know what I have to do, I might just pick the new one, because he might be the one"
you traitor!!!
you cheater!!!
you liar!!!
I see what the truth is, I was nothing to you
I was but a simplicity that could be removed at any given time
but you forgot one important thing
you made the mistake of deceiving me
of betraying me
now, I am your sworn enemy
and I will make it my mission to prevent anyone else from getting hurt
by your treacherous ways
the Deception has started
now you will find no end to the Discord that will find you
and bind you to destruction
where all you will find is purgatory!!!!!!
I was inspired to write this because of a traitor in my life, whom i will not say because she knows who she is.
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Lord Shadow.
(bows; respectfully)
Az.
(smirks)
...may I call you that?
(leans in and grins darkly)
I must admit, Shadow that this particular write speaks to me.
Being a manifesto representing the "darker side of the equation",
I am more inclined to respect your insights. You are one of the
rare few poets here whom compose in a first-person perspective
that does not come off as hokey or shallow about your experiences
and I find the level of your wrath lends to your believability.
"the stone-cold, rip your heart out, break your spirits truth"
...strikingly congruent; parallel in the strictest of senses to
a mantra of mine, Azreal...
(frowns; with gravity)
...but I digress.
(smiles through his jagged teeth and lights a smoke)
The Truth.
(exhales)
...harder to hear than any lie, no?
...deeper than the deepest abyss.
(inhales)
Words are wind, Az.
...and weaponry, all the same.
I understand this write.
...very well done.
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Amasing
very intense. I love this it is amasing! Goodjob!!!
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Such Hatred
You put your hatred into beautiful words, that I think everyone can relate to. This was well written. I felt your anger. Good Job.
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hmm
such such hatred for one person....makes me think this person is a real devil. Wish I could say something to make you smile :3
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wow.....im sorry
thta is a sad poem but i get it and i am sorry that you have been betrayed like that people are just so mean arent they?...
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Fuk you anthony don't talk to me anymore WE ARE OVER READ THIS OV TO THE ER OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Lady Fairy.
(bows; if ever so slightly...)
Hell hath no fury.
(...and grins like the devil he is)
Lord Shadow here knows not what he says, Dark Sexy.
...allow him his foibles, poet and judge not lest... blah blah blah.
(rolls a barbed gauntlet at the wrist fluidly)
...he means well.
(nods; impishly)
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Daughter of Night
Wow anthony so much hate for this one girl. I'm sorry you got hurt sweetie but hey thier are other people out their who could be the one don't give up ok. As for the poem well written and strong emotions put into this piece. I always did love your poetry
sincerly,
angel
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