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to never feel anything greater, than this.


she takes his hand,
with her lips
to his ear,
whispers
thoughts
of tempting
indiscretion.

her fingers
sliding
across his shoulders,
up his neck,
through his hair.

"what is it tonight,
you are looking for?"

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as it has been months since i've been able to write ANYTHING, i figured it was about time to start going through fifty or so pages of things i'd written then hid away before this break in inspiration, and get some things posted!

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  • checkmate
    November 25
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    hm. not bad at all. every time i read it, it just seems better than the last time.