She's drowning inside,
inside the heart she never wanted.
With the life that haunts every dark little corner,
so that everywhere she turns, her skin is soon taunted.
She's screaming and aching,
just wanting to let go.
but it's to hard, to hard for her to feel,
but she gonna have to know.
A life without the cuts,
that're slashed against her skin.
or the angry crimson drops,
that sooth her viens, till the end.
She'll float away,
away into a world were pain goes by fast,
and when someones at her door,
there will be no reminder of the past.
Author notes
nah. not in the mood right now. tired. going to go to bed soon. 
so you digging it already?
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jordan...is this about me?
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Another awesome write. Being able to put yourself in someone else's shoes is a hard thing to do. Specially for one so young. A few little things to fix. In the second stanza third line. It should be too for an not just to. Thats it but still Great write
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thanks. i will look forward to doing more of this later. now i will just need time to think about what you saying and i should be all good to go. and thanks. again.
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thank you guys.
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i like it. very well written
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ha ha. im so digging the pic. and anyways thanks.
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This poem is totally baller
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sorry, but what do you mean by baller? and thanx for the applause!
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baller- wow, fantastic, amazing, awesome
thats what baller means=]
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I really like this one,
and ive totally felt this way before.
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cool. if only i knew what it felt like. but this poem was really about my friend who is going through some hard times right now. so im glad you understand. cause i know that in her feelings there are more than enough that i can understand.
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jordan is this about meh?
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