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If Only I Could

If only I could...


Play with your hair for an instant
Glide my fingers over your eyebrow

Kiss your eye for a little while

Grab your nose and just hold you close

 

Tease your lips a little bit

Breath near your neck for a sec

Hold your waist

And don't care about what they will say

 

 

 

© Lislaine Bermudez

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  • niqueindahouse
    September 27
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    I like it. It's very easy to visualise and relate to. Brilliant!


  • XxWillow LeafxX
    September 24
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    aww

    so sweet! makes me think of the boy i love


  • deep blue sea
    September 23
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    very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee n extremely shweet


  • emanon
    September 18
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    I like it!


  • tarcus
    September 18

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    I like this and the way it leads one to think about the consquences of others thoughts on our actions which should never be a reason to stop doing what we wish to do.
    Goes well with the pic as well.


  • Sweet-Sins
    September 18
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    interesting.. yeah its good

    x


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 18

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    Wow, this is such a great interpretation of this picture and something that I think a lot of people can relate to. Wonderful thoughts here and all the best to you with it!




    Jeremy0826


  • wander of the sky
    September 18
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    this beautiful


  • sgking123 gold member
    September 18
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    wow

    this was warm and cosy all the way.....you made me so warm....now sugegst me way to normalize...lol


  • arnica karuna
    September 17

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    Beautiful

    Liz, this is such a beautiful write! i totally identify with it and boy!!! do i hate worrying about what others think or say! I agree that people are rather unreasonable most of the times, and this poem has you sum up what we should do- not give them a damn!!
    Cheers n keep writing.

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