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A debt



I'm afraid I've incurred a debt, my friends.
It's terrible, but I'll admit the truth-
So far remiss I've been...
Without the hint of excuse.

You see, I have this little fan.
It's helped me through all sorts of things.
From when the summer first began
Guilt fills me now, remembering.

It kept me cool, and even-tempered
When I was feeling homicidal
My worries all were quick assured
Yet, still I have been idle.

For the cheery breezes of optimism
I have it, alone to thank.
Filled full with care and altruism
Even when the poems stank.

So thank you, dear friend;
You've always been so kind.
Good wishes on their way I send..
Hoping you're easy for them to find.


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To a dear friend who knows who he is.

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  • WonderfulDreamz
    September 17
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    Sweet,Awesome,Sensative

    This is really good... And i really Love it!! : )
    Srry i dont applause much! : )


  • sinfull
    September 16

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    sweet originality

    also left open enough to allow reader to interpret as wishes. Minimak dressing keeps this pen elegant and uncluttered. very nice!