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How Could You..

How can you accuse me of ruining your life
When you were the one that stepped into mine?
How can you say I never loved you
When YOU were the one that broke MY heart?

I told you I loved you every day
I told you you had my heart!
But you were the one that slipped
You went and tore it apart!

I was always here for you
But you never came when you should.
I always tried to help with your problems
In any way I possibly could.

You always took me for granted
You hurtfully shoved me away..
You never knew how much that hurt
How much you caused me pain..

How can you say I never loved you
How can you say I'M hurting YOU?!
When it's YOU that is hurting ME
Because I still fu/cking love you!

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  • BabeyGirl
    2 days ago
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    wow

    i can relate to this alot... my ex is the same.. n yer the worst part is when yu still love them.. i like the way yu have written this...

  • wow

    i like this alot, i can kinda somewhat relate with my ex, i loved this. very well writen.


  • FailedLove
    November 4
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    aww i really enjoyed ur poem


  • Freiheit89
    October 21
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    i want you

  • Xx-Aaron-Forget-Xx
    September 17

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    Guys are fucked, oh wait im a guy o.O, Listen girl I told you everything will be alright, people are missing out on you a tremendous person fuck them okay? just stay strong keep ya head up and live life.. people tell me that everyday.. I listen sometimes.. but sometimes I dont, I know it's going to be hard trust me I do.. just.. we all have to stay together on this and words can always help they really can.. I never thought anything anyone or any action could help me.. but I was totally wrong, I'm always here to talk and look at the other supporters you have too! You need to smile and just fuck the past.. because a really good friend of mine told me.. We all deserve a second chance...

    ~Aaron~


  • TLostAndAlone1
    September 16
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    Well done !

    It's amazing the things that happen in relationships but for some reason good or bad they always make the best poetry.


  • Princess Kitten-
    September 16

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    Maybe the title can be "How could you."

    This ish sad.. And I'm sorry, L. =[ He wasn't for you, trust me. Everything will be alright. =] I'm here for you.

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