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Finding my Limits

Light refracting from rooftops
I push myself further
Further to the brink
From him
From you
From self control and fate

I hate, I fear
I wonder and doubt

I don't know
If I can survive
Without

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Calculus...

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  • Montey silver member
    November 29
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    This is excellent.Fantastic flow, with just enough mystery to make me wonder quite what its about(the feelings are clear,but I guess there's quite a story behind this).Love the last stanza.Montey