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if I try hard enough

i drove real fast but it was still too slow
i attempted suicide a few months ago
two people know and one doesn't care
i had to wake up but that's only fair

there's not much more to say
poetry's dry and i'm okay
back in school and going to class all day
because everything's fine and i'm okay

yeah everything's fine and i'm okay
eating with some friends
wishing things could change
because today and yesterday are always the same

two people know and one doesn't care
because everything's fine and i'm okay

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  • Lizzie-Moffat
    September 17
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    I really like this poem but its sad and perhaps suicide isn't the only answer....