Someday perhaps, while maybe's wait,
day dreams smile with night dream's lips.
Whispers and words incite longings,
hopes rest deep on soft tomorrows.
Pillowed memories shoot arrowed joy
soaring on plucked feathers to the sun.
Cosmic unleashing of emotion and hope,
contained in REM rhythms subliminal song.
Together. time steals, we remain;
one soul is silent, is watching,
as one soul moves while the hearts beat
sustains substance, giving his all.
Experiencing now tomorrow's yesterday's,
today's moments cherished for what they are.
A foundation for further growth, development
as assured as the sands fall, fate brings destiny.
In a list
A contest entry
- Does anybody out there want to collab with me? by Griswold.
900 points, ended September 23, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
projectile spewing thoughts
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mmmm this is as beautiful, as beautiful gets is it not...so soul seeringly awe inspiring...like laying on ones back on a summer night...watching the stars......you portray such magnitude....seriously nice write
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wow
this was an intense collaboration and that conveyed so dense a feel and so exciting a point of view of romance at its best.Kudos to the two fo you.made me feel fresh ahemmmmmm! -
A thought-provoking poem. Worth reading over again! Well said; a great collab.
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Very nice
A very smooth read. A very good write by two good poets
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Very nice collab
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Nice collab
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this is great!!!! good luck in the contest, i LOVE YOUR FIRST STANZA ESPECIALLY
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wow! i'm speechless. LoL jk but i can't wait to see what happens when u 2 put your heads together.
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