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Benevolence

So have you seen the light
Flowing from the moon?
Or are you standing in the shadows
Giving up too soon?
But I'll come wind you up
As a new dove learns to fly away
So that your thunderstorm
Will brew another day


Author notes

The dove is a symbol for love.

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  • spiritraven
    September 20
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    Very nice

    I enjoyed this write. Very strong imagery. Thank you for entering and best of luck