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Drenched in Wet Dreams

Light scattered raindrops
Fall cold upon the ground
Clouds gather and a storm ignites,
By dusk, inciting a Passionate riot;
Awakening excitment and  life in the night!
Great Lighting strikes!
Water falls in blankets
Over strobe lit flesh,
Waves of forgotten fulfillment
Pool and move in caves of the dead!
Stagnant Water flows through them
Tonight with life,
Despite losses at the cruel hands of time.
The ravenous growling  thunder
Strongly resoundes throughout my bones,
Vibrates and shakes my body to wake;
Electric jolts defibrillate and peak
This slowly flat-lining soul;
A new life in the darkness!
Clouds dissipate by dawn...
And as the world brightens by mere increments,
The blinding daylight arrives,
Masked in despise for the lives
We are by day, existing...
As the heavy rain gets lighter
It falls cold and lonely, once more, on the ground
I stand, as scattered drops fall,
Drenched in beautiful emotions
That once were lost, but now are found.

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  • Judith Chandler
    October 13
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    Nice write. You have certainly explored rain imagery quite thoroughly.