Woke up through The night ,death knocking my door
Door opens, nurse walks in and releases my chains
Bad mistake, I had no morphine today
Oh my I am one lucky lunatic, she’s dead in my eyes
I can feel her dying inside, she doesn’t know who I am
Soon she will, hello sweetie your all mine, die bitch!
Hands rapped around her waist, I pull her down
Going in for the kill, she screams out loud
No one will hear you I say, as I smiled at her being
I tell how I’m going to bash her skull in, bang, bang
I bashed her head all over, swollen hanging off
She’s pure dead now, she suffered too much
Now I make my escape, pure look every one is eating
Doors open at the front, no guards on duty
So I put on her uniform, and ripped her hair out
And used it like a wig, yes I am a female now
I walk casual down the corridor, soaked in blood
Blood dropping, with every breathe on the floor
No one to be seen, this is to easy, she died good
I hate those nurse bitches, injecting life into my veins
Yes she deserved that and more will suffer to
Perhaps a graveyard I will desecrate today
Perhaps a school full of children, umm yes!
Maybe I will enter I nunnery, and get me some virgin nuns
I'm packing pure evil here, and I cant wait to hit out
Hit those streets and torture some people, with all my hate
Yes god knows me, and all you will know me even more
I’m coming for ya’ll, you be sure waiting for me
Through your bedroom window, eating your food tonight
Perhaps I might eat you tomorrow, and your kids as well
Do I leave the asylum for good, those days behind me
One nurse slain, I enjoyed gutting her real finely
She screamed, but I covered her mouth gently
Laughing at her begging for her life, i ended that
Where is the police when you need them, 911 haha
She never knew I was the devil, she wish I was an angel
So I am fleeing my trap, my hell inside society
Behind those walls, I charge my hate for all of you
My evil inside my heart, grew stronger and darker
Only if you knew, the hell I dreamed up for your kids
All those young ladies, I will surely put to the knife
when I get them, hell will be their marriage forever
So I pace my self around the graveyard, the church was empty
The door was open, I knew god was home here
I walked in blooded and soaked, in that nurses remains
I caught the eye of the priest, he yelled at me at first
Then he muttered to himself, like a angel with broken wings
He knew god was out today, and Satan came back fallen or not
I was that demon, my prayers were his in death
So I walked up to him, mocking his every being
Cursing god and what not, yelling for Satan
He was scared, so he should be I am insane
He got down on his knees, sorry I said no mercy from me
I asked him any last requests, he replied I go with god
I said don’t tease me old man, then I slashed his face
He cried and made a sound, that turned me on
The sound of a dying man, who wanted to live
Oh mary he shouted, before I decapitated his head over his precious alter
I played with him awhile, yes I played soccer with his head
I screamed and yelled at god, kill me now, before I kill again
No reply as usual, the big man was happy that I killed this old paedophile
So I washed away the blood, in holy water
Sorry to say, no the water didn’t burn me, when I washed my hands
I went on my way, I had my fun twice already
One fat nurse, I hated her like every women in my life
One priest, dirty paedophile, I sodomized him real Christian like
Shall I go on? Really? I don’t think you want me to!
Shall I?
Really?
No I have done enough now!
So I will leave the rest to your own imagination. And you can imagine what followed next!
A contest entry
- AP Asylum II *~ The Great Escape~* Total Madness by Poetic-Theorem.
900 points, ended September 20, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Drug/Morbid Prewrites by XneverXgoodXenoughX.
1200 points, ended October 14, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TOTAL FILTH by Engelbert Humpalot.
550 points, ended November 28, 17 entries
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Comments
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I liked the phrase "I sodomised him real Christian like" as that was quite amusing. But that was about all I liked.
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wow this is definately messed up. i really like this piece. it was incredably close to making a finalist, but not quite. but that it a sign that it was absolutely amazing to read. the emotions coming off this piece was inpecable, and i loved it. thanks so much for sharing, and good luck in my contest!
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In this poem you have mistakes, some lines don't flow so well but still the whole poem was an awesome read. So dark and gory, killings to satisfy ones sick mind. We should team up and go on a killing spree lol! Or perhaps you like to work alone lol! Well done and congratulations on the trophy won so far.
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Wow
I see that you chose to wear the Cloak of Gruesome Gore
Indeed you wear it well
My poetic genres is very versatile
I'm a great fan of the Dark genre and Macabre
You have taken the reader on quite a bloodthirsty quest
Very vivid imagery (gory as hell)
I was captivated from start to finish
My oh my, what a huge mistake in
letting this Patient out of the AP Asylum
he is walking evil; the devil himself
I liked the way you presented the storyline...
from planning the gory escape to the Vindictiveness that is ahead...
"One fat nurse, I hated her like every women in my life
One priest, dirty paedophile, I sodomized him real Christian like"
This monster will seem to continue his bloodbath until he is stopped
Good storyline for a horror flick as well
Wish you luck in the contest
keep your talented quill dancing
David
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WHAAAA!!!! Disgustingly dark and gory.
Gotta love those drug pimping nurses, eh?
Great piece of poetry! You really know how to kill them...he he he....
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holy shit, this is really gory and gross and hella frickin awsome!!! I love it!!! i cant believe i almost missed this!!!
hella fantastic job!!! I love it!!!
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WHOA! SOrry it took me so long to get around to reading this... was busy
This is fantastic! So vivid so visual! And so absolutely insane! lol
I really don't know what else to say to this, you had me cringing at every turn. Absolutely delightfully wicked
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