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Release

Encapsulated mind
urging for release
sealed wisdom overflow's

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  • celestial
    September 25

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    What a wonderful way to the describe the mind "as encapsulating". It reminds me of a model of how a capsle opens once digested to release the medicinal properties within it. It's almost like what the mind needs, or what the mind can contribute to society. Wisdom, as a sort of medicine.