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I cannot say Goodbye.

I know your feeling so deep,
I know you face so well,
I know your sadness is dwelling,
I know happiness will overwhelm.

When us two are together,
Time we share does stop,
In laughter and enjoyment,
Us two play the tune.

Cradle the enemies in our hands,
And throw away our fears,
For when us two are so close,
Nothing can break us apart.

I write this poem on behalf,
Of love and happiness and joy,
Wash away forbidden thoughts,
And drain away whats left.

Our friendship bind so strong,
Our caringness even more,
Everytime we meet,
Thoughts flood through our minds.

I see it in your face,
That despair would take over,
If ever we were too deprived,
Of cradles from eachother.

I know our bond will stay,
For better and for worse,
Through fun, bewilderment and laughter,
Our hearts are  tied forever.

Author notes

My mind has been so busy. My life is slowly changing around me and the only thing keeping me from goin mentally insane is writing. This one in particular has taken thoughts from my mind and recorded them on paper.

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 17, 2009

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    nice work in seeking to capture the prayer of retaining forever the connection with one in whom our heart and soul is so deposited. well done.


  • evershine-90
    September 16, 2009

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    Your thougts are described beautifully in this piece, The joy of being together, the sadness of being apart and the hope of being in touch forever. Beautiful work here Great job!