I deviate from the scene;
cold chills run up my spine
and I know what you did,
I don't want you back
or around.
I am neither here
or there,
look at me bitch!
I loved you,
my heart defined
but now I'm empty
and breathless,
you've taken my soul;
I hope to God
she was worth it.
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Wow, such passion in these words, but yet you suppress them to a whimper when real life comes to play... I hope you like being treated bad, because accepting this relationship is what you will get. good luck to ya
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yeah, i cower like a bitch when it comes to sticking up for myself against anyone....but when i do stand up to those who bully me or shove me down it's never pretty... fucking bullshit contradictions i come across...
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