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hells pit

this bloody rose weeps
as her heart
begins too get weak
she's lost in this world
where everything smells so sweet
lost loves reside
and drugs begin too hide.
while still sending her high into the sky
her beauty glows
but she begins too wilt
into never ending
pure guilt.
her thorns
will cut you deep
all while her heart sleeps
she keeps you near
yet far away
too keep her own pain
at bay

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