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Natures cause

Fluoresce the seed of nature, born and bred
The singular thread grown, budded to perfection
Natures speaks loud, life lights eternal effigy's
That birds sings finely in tune, all seasons
Weathers turn cold, hot turns to soft butter
Like fine winds blowing Eskimos, in treacle toffee

Streams glow, passing life fish and all kinds
All matter of life transforms, a magnificent tree
Beauty can only wonder, those days and arrays
The Sweet nicety's, the finery's of  rose buds
Winter comes, and seasons dared its song
In necklaces of silk, Cotton fields adorn

Vented generosity, daylight speaks it name
The tune of fabled flowers, sing truth today
Flowers to prick and bud, nature at its sweetest
Damp soil torn, but highly changeable in the sun
Beauty if perfectly crafted, in natures cause
What wonder we treasure, beauty to be worn indeed

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  • kaibab silver member
    September 23

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    Beauty as perfecty creafted love,
    such color busting green below,
    throes of emoting petaled glove,
    to sing in blue-dream sky, above...

    thanks so much for this lovely entry


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 16

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    Like fine winds blowing Eskimos, in treacle toffee... love this line

    and, Winter comes, and seasons dared its song
    In necklaces of silk, Cotton fields adorn

    this is so pretty as it is beautiful
    I awe in your words

    Best wishes and good luck

    Julie

  • UnbreakableSoul gold member
    September 16

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    Brilliant!

    Just an excellent write for sure!
    Awesome!
    Good luck to you!


    • Deaths Prayer
      September 16
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      Thank you for your kind words you are right I did mean bred instead of "bread" lol

      I appreciate that