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9/15/09 *JRL* Love is a perpetual wound.

Love is the deepest wound of all,
It never heals,
Never leaves,
Its always there,
Forcing you to face reality,
Crying for hope,
Pleading for grace,
Living in fear you may lose him some day,
There’s always that warm feeling when you’re looking face to face,
That sets your heart ablaze,
Putting that smile on your face,
What do you do,
When he’s far away,
And your thinking,
What’s he doing,
What’s he saying,
Those feelings you cant just forget,
Lust and joy,
Sorrow and regret,
Love causes everything,
Emotions you never want to face,
Such as jealousy and rage.

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  • emLeejo
    September 27

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    OooohOhhh.... Very nice, I liked it.. you can like see how much this relationship effects you in the way you write... You're a great writer and a great person, Love conquers all, we just need to keep faith in it. Love ya.