From all areas around my sides
I can't seem to find
I crawl around on my knees
Singing a song aloud this kind that brings us down
With a beat a skip and a scratch
But we want it even harder then that
The sweetest treasures are gone from us, just gone
Wicked spells that do enhance the both of us
And the continuation of this unwise walk
Cast it all down into ruins
We must have a separation to smell what is really sweet
I need to leave you this way because you can't help me up to my feet
Author notes
N E G A T O R E Y F A N
Prompt:
"Spiritual Subluxation"
A contest entry
- Spiritual Prompt/Dark Ink Spilled, Please by liquidmindforever.
700 points, ended September 30, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute
Dear Poet,
Thank you so much for entering my contest:"Spiritual Subluxation," with your
submission "Lagger."
You wrote this so i could visualize the pictures you created.
wishing you the best
till then
stay
liquid

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Nice poem!


