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Eternal

Eternal life.
Yea it's appealing.
A frozen state of youth,
No future health failure,
No fear of death.
But what would be the point?
To live day after day.
Time has no meaning,
When it has no end.
But what if you could find love?
Pure true eternal love.
Now that would be worth it.
And how lucky of her,
To have found such a thing.
Not only eternal life,
But eternal love.
If only that could be me.

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  • Time focus on Me
    September 18
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    Alsome

    Poem u done a alsome job loved the poem. U keep up the marvelous work. well expressed n well written

  • Sorrows Angel
    September 17
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    sounds like you're giving up on the search. good poem either way