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Vampire Addiction

Last night she broke into my dark dreams,
Hiding her generic vampire breed,
Touched my lips to delicate shapes,
I bled loosing my heart to the ghoul.

By the day I remember nothing,
Except the weakness in my bones,
Once a week she would explore my mind,
Hold me to her total indulgence.

Each day a week turned to haunt the nights,
Time flew by to her bonded affection,
Captive I loved the infatuation,
Last moments spent in satisfaction?

Today I taste her fluid mixed with mine;
Will these afflictions pursue my bloodline?

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 18
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    I agree, your finishing sums it all up, thank you for your wonderful entry and good luck in my contest, Josie


  • arafura gold member
    September 16
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    Very good. I love the strong finishing stanza!