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Puddle

A pattern of spots on the pavement,
A churn of dust into slosh
That’s pattered into mud,
A blank slate for the footprints that dug deep
And drank the rain into a puddle
Around passers’ feet.

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the rain...
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  • Derge
    September 29
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    this is really matter-of-fact and thats what i like about it.
    it takes something so simple and makes it pretty.

    nice write:]