A pattern of spots on the pavement,
A churn of dust into slosh
That’s pattered into mud,
A blank slate for the footprints that dug deep
And drank the rain into a puddle
Around passers’ feet.
Author notes
the rain...
=]
A contest entry
- its a shame to waste the rain....give me 50 by Derge.
400 points, ended November 22, 41 entries
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Comments
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this is really matter-of-fact and thats what i like about it.
it takes something so simple and makes it pretty.
nice write:]

