After a much profound thought, I decided to improve myself and my life
The question evident remained; “What will be wisest for me!”
Should I earn more and more and become rich and rich
Would that be wise!!
Or shall I despise everything, run to woods and be an ascetic
Will that be wise!!
I am an extremist, so the evasive solution of combination of two won’t work
I want to know the perfect sure shot recipe to be wise
I for a few moments, decide to carry the soul to His abode
And the request the mortal attire to look lively so that on return complications aren’t aboard
There His chambers’ do I knock
He; “Who is there?”
I; “What do you think a post-woman or a pizza delivery gal?”
He; “Oh my Rudie, It is you, Lovely daughter, what brings you here?”
I; “I want to be wise, so guide me, how should I be
Shall I be rich or not
Shall I do make up or not
Shall I dress in red or in orange
Shall I try to impress people
Shall I forget others grossed in myself
Shall I forget myself grossed in others
Shall I shall not I
What shall be I
I want to be wise”
Hahahaha…hehehehe…hohohoho….
He, “I am laughing like this after centuries
Shall I, shall not I
Ok! Let me tell you a secret
Wisdom comes by paying a price
You need to be attached but not in that measure not to let it go
You need to enjoy and rest but not as much that you forget your goal
You need to love people but not to forget the death the ultimate truth
You need to happily accept pain but not to become keen enough to invite suffering
Whatever you get don’t contemplate, compare or look at rest
If you compare yourself to others then how could you be the best
I would take your test; of the things you most love you would be bereft
If still you my daughter, my lovely angel, don’t complain or protest
Despite one dream crash landing during the day
With another paper plane flying high above cosmos you rest
And consistently you prove yourself unaffected by destiny’s zest
Then of course you would be one in a million apart, my daughter wisest
My Baawri the best.”
Tell me
Comments
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WOW
Wow! This is a real rocking piece! A journey to deep inside yur heart!
I congratulate yu with my whole heart for writing such a marvellous pice!
THANQ vry vry much -
Clever and deep
You have reached inside and found a depth many never know. You have written words from the heart that many could never write. You understand Karma and the power that we all have inside but only a few find. You underdstand the balance needed for energy to be powerful and spirit to have reign in your life.
Very well done on all levels. I am impresssed.
Thank you adding me as a fav. I will certainly do the same for you.
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now isn't this what all the wise men's teaching and all the great books have said. Nice and different poem. I like the way it has been written - as though conversation is going on. The only part that i did not like much is "He" calling you angel and stuffs like that.. :-) would have been better if HE had just called you his daughter. Nice write though. I really enjoyed reading this piece of poem
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