{Before}
I gasp my last breath
{Then}
My very last thought
{After}
All the pain you caused me
{Too Late}
Wasn't worth this.
I gasp my last breath
{Then}
My very last thought
{After}
All the pain you caused me
{Too Late}
Wasn't worth this.
Author notes
Hope it's what you wanted...
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A contest entry
- Suicide Letters by Mango Memories.
1000 points, ended September 30, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A snippet that says much.
All the best with this.
Ken
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very wise dark and lovely words
indeed.....
well done poetess!
well done!
it's not like you can
sit up in your coffin
and proclaim:
death...isn't at alll..
what I dreamed of or expected!
way to write!
ears/Seattle sis
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Wow short and not so sweet. i loved it. well writen straight to the point. Good luck in the contest i hope you do well but if i were to sit and brag about luck it would be descriminateing to you writing which i shall not do.
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