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A random excuse me on a wednesday morning

underneath the quilted fingers
a softer handshake beckons
curls into space

a slow dance to the morning air
sun brushes the curtains
saying hello, hello, hello

curves into warmth
transpire to open eyes
certain that today is owned

smiling becomes easier
enough time to linger
on an older face surely













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  • grm
    September 20

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    i never own my today's...i only rent them.
    plus, i like getting the deposit back when i turn them in


  • Stats
    September 18

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    like a morning breeze

    Older only by a day and younger by the hour! As your soul is.


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    September 16

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    i adored the curvatious nature to this
    reminds me of acceptance for lots of reasons


  • Thewordflow
    September 16

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    This really made me smile

    lovely title as well x

    D


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 16

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    I not only love your writing, I also love your titles, which are poems in and of themselves, Gill.

  • tara wilson gold member
    September 16

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    smiles...."a slow dance to the morning air", that's what this poem is. so lovely Gill. xo.

  • Rowan gold member
    September 16

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    sounds like contentment to me... excellent Gilly.


  • michael thomas gold member
    September 16

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    nice / very nice / concise / on spot / tight / your poetry is changing slightly for the better

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