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My nights are long and my heart aches
to go to sleep and never wake
for my dreams are so nice
Dreams of you holding me tight
My mind is racing really fast
When I think  to dream for ever at last

My days are hard and full of sorrow
I want to sleep and never see tomorrow
I want to stay where I can just be me
My truest form is an angel sitting in a tree.

My weeks seem to never end.
I just want to dream and be with you again.

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  • majorpaul silver member
    November 18
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    Very nice

    How about To sleep: perchance to dream?


  • Warrior of Peace
    November 10

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    wow

    How about TO BE With you in my dream again? It an exllcent poem expressing how wonderful a dream can be. Somtimes dreams can be so real you can actual feel the person in your dream beside you. It hard to remember it just a dream.

  • White rose wolf

    how about wanting to dream, or dream comfort with you, it's just a thought but very good i loved reading


  • Spectre of Serenity
    September 30

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    When days are so hard and full of sorrow
    I would rather sleep, never see morrow
    I want to be where i can just be--
    in my truest form, an angel for eternity

    ok just givin it a try
    delete it if u dont like it


  • BlackJoker
    September 21
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    "Dreaming of You" That's what I can give you for a title Shortie.

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