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to my favorites (um...this is not a poem...)

popping on for just a few seconds...

i have neglected your work. but i have not forgotten you.
i mean to spend time with your words very soon.

i have gone back to school to study english - creative writing
and, ironically, i haven't had much time to write lately

still trying to work a full time job, too.

haven't devoted time to your thoughts
haven't spent time with your feelings

like i should - like i want to.

these are just a few words to say
i'll be back soon - because

i miss you - very much.



- mary jo







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  • deercatcher
    September 28

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    Hallo, Mary Jo!
    Congratulations on your ambitions! Success awaits...
    Sister is doing better. The left arm is lagging. She sits up, and moves around with a cane or walker with her left leg at about 30%. She has lost a lot of weight, and we have become quite close.


  • Man of Harlech silver member
    September 21
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    I always looked forward to your work. It is a pleasure to know that you are honing your skills.

  • loafy
    September 18
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    goodluck with grammer and endless heaps of essays!

  • Bruce silver member
    September 16
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    We miss you too!
    Good for you! Going back to school!


  • tara wilson gold member
    September 16
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    missing you too Mary Jo, wishing you all the best with your writing class!

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