I came along as my sister shot the gas tank
I ran to the truck and gave a quick yank
no burns in sight and I sure was glad
for hell hath no fury like an uncle who is mad
I tied him to a tree away from the truck fire
took my sister's gun and gave it a shot to inspire
made him beg and scream for heaven's mercy
sorry, you poor sucker, for you no clemency
I took a stick and roasted it over the heat
nice and toasty red as I laid it to his meat
while he screamed I thought of my niece
unzipped his pants, cut off the offensive piece
let him bleed and beg and cry for help
I cuddled my sister while she wept and wept
the bastard could suffer till his last breath is drawn
for the suffering my niece did till her mom came along
Author notes
(A take off from Nicole Alexander's poem, my sister) What I would have done for my niece.
A contest entry
- What Should She Do? by darlee77.
1250 points, ended September 19, 6 entries
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Very powerful write. Good luck.
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wow - revenge is sweet; and violent. He deserved every second of it...
and I thought I was raw... ! it was still too good for him though. ah, but he will probably roast in hell for a long time too! hieronymous bosch's rendition of hell - that's where he's going! -
perfect
amazing truly. i have a sister and i wish i could have done the same . much luv good write
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a brilliant write, I have four nieces and I can feel how you feel. to me they are the world. I can see myself in your words, thanks for writing this and sharing it!
Bravo!
Love and light
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well honey i am so glad you held it down a bit the first draft was a real B- - - h ...give me the gun now ..it is my turn to kick the witch...finally just due has been spent.. wait!!! until the devil has his due.. yahoo.... well penned love as always♥
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