I long to be with you
And hear your words of wonder
To listen to your truth
To satisfy my hunger
I'm lost inside your mind
When you're sitting next to me
In you I seem to find
That we were meant to be
Shine down on my soul
With stars of love and beauty
And never let me go
Through streets of gold and ruby
I give it all to you
My life, my heart, my dreams
Knowing when life is through
We'll walk in golden streams
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Comments
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I agree with all the comments on this poem...the rhyme was perfect ande it just seemed to flow and was not forces like at all. YOu have a gift for suckering in those with a hope for romance.
Great Read
Good Luck and thank you for entering my conest
Roxy -
Holy crap i'm love sick after reading this it's absolutely romantic gud luck !
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Love it!
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truly a beautiful piece of poetry!
love & blessings
Rend
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I long to be with you
And hear your words of wonder
To listen to your truth
To satisfy my hunger
Wow.. just.. wow. Took my breathe away, the rhyme was magnificent and the message was wonderful. Thank you for entering.
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