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Holding Back

These tears in my eyes, I can't let them go
This pain in my heart I try not to show
All the stress I hold in my mind and my thoughts
I'm fighting it daily but it can't be fought

The pressure is holding me back from the care
Until I explode and then everyone stares
Wondering what went wrong to make me cry
Just wanting to know how I feel and why?

For their own entertainment because they're so bored
For I am the temple where the drama is stored
While none of them care because I'm not the same
Who can like someone yet think they're insane?

So I'm holding back all my pain and my hate
Permanently stuck in this depressing state
The stress is so thundering, it's starting to show
Cause there's tears in my eyes and I can't let them go

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  • rawrgasm
    September 22
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    wow just how i feel


  • interruptedangel19
    September 16
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    Nicely Written

    You captured exactly how I've been feeling for years. The ryhming is perfect and the poem flows beautifully.