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The Meaning...?

Women have their vixen smiles,
and men will use their roguish wiles
…just to be the one that you let in…

  words are made to break our hearts and
souls were made to fall apart

(and life is just a game we never win)

because


my lips were made for kissing

and my words were made for twisting
   
  and the bruising on my knees was done by you


my clothes were made for ripping

(but these hands weren’t made for ticking,)
and my intentions were designed to misconstrue.


This smile was formed for your dismay,

my thoughts were made to lead astray-
    and fingertips were made to pass the time


pain is there to be a guide
(but truth is just another lie)

and breath is just the proof that we survive~

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  • Weetzie bat
    September 16

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    i don't even know what to say but i loved the whole thing. even the sort of slant rhyme. it's started strong and ended perfectly and everything flowed well and took me away.


    my lips were made for kissing

    and my words were made for twisting

    and the bruising on my knees was done by you


    my clothes were made for ripping

    (but these hands weren’t made for ticking,)
    and my intentions were designed to misconstrue.

    this is the part that really got me!
    brava!!!!