chocolate covered candy tasted good for a while
I got tired of it and couldn't handle another bite
I tried another flavor
nothing worked
you made damned sure something did
Author notes
prompt - I am just a scar, 30 words
A contest entry
- Quickie #56 by amaranthine lover.
840 points, ended September 30, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like the interesting twist that you put on this, awesome!
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Oh wow, very original take on
the prompt hun, this was
beautifully executed.
Love it!!
& best wishes in the contest
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oh now Ms. Kari, this is a different take entirely, and one I really loved. that bite-ouch. nicely done mi amiga, I wish you and that kittycat all the bestest.
love forever.
jin
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wow powerful message behind your poetry. full of dark goodness. best of luck to you!
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