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Believe (I want this to be first page)

Believe
Believe in the wonder of the pen
You look for answer and you find words
Words that share a belief in one person
You take those words and build and write

Everyday laughed at and you cry
You shed your heart on a poem
You give up and you get a job
People still laughing because you didn’t succeed

Wondering what might have been
If he only had the strength
Now he sits there crying
Wondering what might have been

SO BELIEVE

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  • randomchick15
    10 hours ago
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    awww

    lovely poem, nice love it


  • Night Rose
    September 17
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    Daughter of night

    i like this poem it's very nice and has great emotions shown in this piece nice work nick

    sincerly,
    angel


  • Inakanu
    September 16
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    this is so good sweety


  • darlee77 gold member
    September 16
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    This is so sad. Good emotional write. God bless.


  • Kay88
    September 16
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    aww baby never wonder never scend guess always believe

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