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The Wishing

there's not alot to say
everything was going great
everytime i'm out of fuel
bring some cheer with yule tide gruel

i'm just getting started (I'm just getting started) (x2)

below,
this old hotel
is a well
where we hid when we were young
and below,
this old hotel
is a well
where we died when we were young

below, well below (x2)
below

My fears are wrapped in plastic
hold fast cause its gone spastic
i know you breathe a word
you die...
we'll leave no one alive

below,
this old hotel
is a well
where we hid when we were young
and below,
this old hotel
is a well
where we died when we were young

below, well below (x2)
below

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