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Pretty Face

Hun, you've got such a pretty face,
But you're still a disgrace.
Never ever gonna be enough,
It's always gonna be far too, tough.
Not thin
Or pretty
Or sweet
Or witty.
You'll never be enough,
No matter how you try.
Hun, all you'll ever be is a pretty face,
Never anything more than a disgrace.
And someday when your pretty face is no more,
You'll be nothing at all,
You stupid fat whore.

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I don't even know...

The past few months I've had major writer's block, and lost my mojo. Do you think I got my mojo back, or does this poem just suck?

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