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The visit.

Missing image

I sit here in my garden

with a thought or two of you

and just as the tear became a drop

there came a butterfly so blue.

 

My lips strecthed back to a smile

as I watched it blink its wings

then happy thoughts of you my dear

made my heart begin to sing.

 

It fluttered to the rose tree

sat on a pure white rose,

taking ages to find my camera

it waited and held its pose.

 

 

Intutation had just told me

it was a spirit saying hello

it was you my darling son

don't ask me how I know...

 

Each time I saw your precious face

before you flew away

I got that lovely feeling

the same I revieved today.

 

So do call again

whenever I'm feeling low

fly into my open arms

and relieve me of my woe.

 

 

 

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 7
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    Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!

    This poem from your heart is so deserving. Blessings to you and yours.
    Loves ya,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Denerica silver member
    September 17
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    So beautiful and spiritual, heartfelt, endearing, the words can keep coming, Excellent. Blessings.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 16

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    With this, you have reached into my heart and painted a soft, most awesome sigh.

    Excellent.

    Love, Buddy


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 16

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    Very tenderly written, from your heart. You are a special lady, one who is always reaching out to others. Bless you, I'm wishing you all the best.
    Peace, love & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Sandygram silver member
    September 16

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    This one has me in tears. I don't know who you are but its is like you looked into my heart and saw exactly what I feel in my heart.This contest has brought out more emotion then I expected. This was so beautiful and it has touched me deeply.
    Thank you for entering it in my contest. A pleasure to read. Best of luck to you . Take care, Sandy


  • Cannonsfire
    September 15
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    Lovely C

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