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Unfold.

"I am fading to someone,
You don't want to know,
I am fading to somewhere,
You don't want to go."

He said it with shame,
No pride to be found,
He said he would spiral,
And crash to the ground.

"He is fading to someone,
I no longer hold dear,
He is fading to somewhere,
That is nowhere near here."

She knew he was scared,
No help could she bring,
She knew he was changing,
Yet could not do a thing.

"He is fading to someone,
We do not even know,
He is fading to somewhere,
But where will he go?"

They all saw it coming,
It hit none with a crash,
They all knew it would happend,
But not in such a quick flash.

"He is fading to someone,
It happend too fast,
He is fading to somewhere,
Be it present or past."

It came without warning,
No alert had been thrown,
It came up in an instant,
No forshadow was shown.

"Hee is fading to someone,
But who is it he be?
He is fading to someone,
And he is now just like me."

She claimed it was over,
If nothing was done,
She claimed she was sorry,
And should not be the one.

"I have found who I am,
I promise to be me,
I have found where to go,
I know where to be."

His voice was so certain,
He knew who he was,
His voice was sincere,
As he killed off the buzz.

"Stay true to yourself,
No matter what you are told,
Stay true to your heart,
And just let life unfold."

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  • RenegadeOfFunk
    2 days ago
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    This was amazing. Much like the girl who wrote it. The rhyming was perfect, the phrasing, and the topic, it was absolutely amazing! love ya

  • Eusebius
    November 3

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    Superb!!!

    Oh, boy, this is exceptionally good, and for someone of just 17 it is monumentally excellent! Sensational meter and you wove two or three thoughts all the way through this amazing poem. I love this write!!!


  • FreeFalling911
    September 15

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    I am fading to somewhere.
    I wish that I could find out who I am and where I want to be.
    I mean I know where I want to be I just have a problem getting there.
    Where do you go when no one else wants you around?
    And how can you survive if no one will hire you...
    Ive lost myself in this world, but I have managed to find myself within what has been lost.

    Thanks for sharing.